Oh my gosh I can't believe that today is the last day of school!!! I am so excited right now. I will miss all of my friends over the summer. I don't have to go to school to learn anymore until fifth grade. Yeah! SCHOOL'S OUT!!
Fine work Jello. Here are a couple of suggestions for edits:The last sentence would read, "I don't have to go to school to learn anymore until fifth grade. Yeah!" In addition, when you are providing a link to an image, say "To find out more about the image click here," and have that whole phrase clickable, if that makes sense. Keep up the great work!!!
Fine work Jello. Here are a couple of suggestions for edits:The last sentence would read, "I don't have to go to school to learn anymore until fifth grade. Yeah!" In addition, when you are providing a link to an image, say "To find out more about the image click here," and have that whole phrase clickable, if that makes sense.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the great work!!!